There are several effects on Acton Acton Acton or that will change the citizens’ life of Acton
There are several effects on Acton
回覆刪除"in" Acton會不會好一點
應該就沒了=]
沒了!!!!!!!!!
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回覆刪除GOOD JOB!
以上~
people won’t used to the new environment if the factory opens.
回覆刪除→people won't get used to the new~
我會想寫people won't adapt the new environment~
In addition, the quality of life will change, people won’t used to the new environment if the factory opens.
回覆刪除＂change＂後的逗號宜用＂；＂。
建議＂people won't adapt to the new environment~＂
1.There are several effects on Acton of opening a large factory.
回覆刪除﹡on→in
2.First, the positive effects are more job opportunities to the citizens of Acton.
﹡First, the positive effect is that more job opportunities will be provided to the citizens of Acton.
3.However, the negative effects are that there will be more pollution in the town.
﹡只提到一件事，effects刪調s，參見上題。
4.In addition, the quality of life will change, people won’t used to the new environment if the factory opens.
﹡used前面加be或是get。
﹡以上，淺見…
people won’t used to the new environment應該是get used to哦
回覆刪除the negative effects are that there will be more pollution應該是the negative effect is ~哦