2011年6月9日 星期四

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    Getting married has many effects on my life. First, after getting married, I have to take care of more people and things. And when I do a decision, I have to think about my husband, my children and so on. Second, I must be more responsible, if we have problems, my husband and I will deal with them together. Because we are a couple and anyone of us is other’s support. The last effect is that I learned how to control emotion. If we argue, we would calm down first, and then communicate with each other. These effects make me more responsible and know how to keep a marriage.

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  1. 1.I have to take care of more people and things.
    -->I have to take care of more people and daily affairs.

    2. when I do a decision
    -->when I make a decision

    3.Second, I must be more responsible, if we have problems, my husband and I will deal with them together. Because we are a couple and anyone of us is other’s support.
    -->Second, I must be more responsible. If we have problems, my husband and I will deal with them together because we are a couple and either of us is the other's support.

    4.The last effect is that I learned how to control emotion.
    -->The last effect is that I learned how to control emotions.


    Revise all these and I will do what I promise.

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