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Getting married has many effects on my life. First, after getting married, I have to take care of more people and things. And when I do a decision, I have to think about my husband, my children and so on. Second, I must be more responsible, if we have problems, my husband and I will deal with them together. Because we are a couple and anyone of us is other’s support. The last effect is that I learned how to control emotion. If we argue, we would calm down first, and then communicate with each other. These effects make me more responsible and know how to keep a marriage.
1.I have to take care of more people and things.
回覆刪除-->I have to take care of more people and daily affairs.
2. when I do a decision
-->when I make a decision
3.Second, I must be more responsible, if we have problems, my husband and I will deal with them together. Because we are a couple and anyone of us is other’s support.
-->Second, I must be more responsible. If we have problems, my husband and I will deal with them together because we are a couple and either of us is the other's support.
4.The last effect is that I learned how to control emotion.
-->The last effect is that I learned how to control emotions.
Revise all these and I will do what I promise.