2011年6月9日 星期四
Discussing effects-(1)
There are several effects of drinking too much caffeine. First of all, too much caffeine may make you feel nervous and anxious easily. When you do something important, you may blow it. Second, caffeine also affects your sleep, if you drink too much caffeine, you would have insomnia which may make you can’t sleep well. Finally, caffeine will bring about fast or irregular heartbeat. And that may let you feel uncomfortable. So we shouldn’t drink too much caffeine, it is harmful to our health.
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應該要改coffee會好一點(汗)
回覆刪除沒有問題了(笑)
沒有啥錯誤
回覆刪除drinking too much caffeine
回覆刪除咖啡因改成咖啡噢~~
這裡的blow是什麼意思呀@@
不會是＂吹＂吧(? XDDD
have insomnia這個用法不知道對不對，
回覆刪除可以換成suffer from insomnia
blow it 是〝搞砸〞的意思嗎?
blow it 好像比較口語化，建議換一個片語。
foul up或screw up都可以
There are several effects of drinking too much caffeine.
回覆刪除裡的 of 我會寫on
以上~
喝咖啡因總覺得怪怪的
回覆刪除用攝取比較好吧!
攝取→ingest
There are several effects of drinking too much caffeine. 在下提出些許說法，請參閱：
回覆刪除＂effects of too much caffeine＂
＂effects of having too much caffeine＂
＂effects of consuming too much caffeine＂
至於＂drinking ~＂也有不少人使用，但不知其正確性。
Second, ...which may make you can’t sleep well.
在下欲稍改：
＂...which may keep you from sleeping well.＂亦或
＂...which may keep you awake.＂
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
1.There are several effects of drinking too much caffeine.
回覆刪除﹡caffeine→coffee containing much caffeine
2....you would have insomnia which may make you can’t sleep well.
﹡can't→unable to
﹡另外，人稱要一致。
以上，淺見…
drinking too much caffeine用drinking感覺很奇怪耶
回覆刪除大概這樣吧