2011年4月27日 星期三
Comparing-(1)
There are two driving licenses. It's a coincidence that the owner of the two licenses are women. One of the women is Stephanie and the other is Ann. Stephphanie's eye color is brown. Similarly, Ann's eye color is brown. And both Stephanie and Ann are five feet and three inches tall. Moreover Stephanie has the same hair color as Ann. Finally, they are born on the same date. It's really amazing that they have so many similar things.
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It's a coincidence that the owner of the two licenses are women.
回覆刪除owner應該要加s
以上.....
that the owner of the two licenses are women這裡owner要加s然後are women中間要不要加both比較好呢?
回覆刪除Similarly, Ann's eye color is brown.
回覆刪除這句is後面+個also感覺更好:D
It's a coincidence that the owner of ...
回覆刪除＂owner＂要加＂s＂。
Finally, they are born on the same date.
＂are＂用過去式＂were＂比較好。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
1.It's a coincidence that the owner of the two licenses are women.
回覆刪除→It's a coincidence that the owners of the two licenses are women.
2.And both Stephanie and Ann are five feet and three inches tall.
→Besides, both Stephanie and Ann are five feet and three inches tall.
3.Moreover Stephanie has the same hair color as Ann.
→Moreover, Stephanie has the same hair color as Ann.
4.Finally, they are born on the same date.
→Finally, they were born on the same date.
5.It's really amazing that they have so many similar things.
→It's really amazing that they have so many similarities. (我會想這麼改…)
(以上，淺見…)
the owner of the two licenses are women.
回覆刪除owner要加s
Moreover Stephanie has the same hair color as Ann.
moreover跟Stephanie中間加個逗號會不會比較好?
a coincidence that the owner of the two licenses are women.
回覆刪除裡的 owner 要+S喔!
Moreover Stephanie has the same hair color as Ann.
裡的 moreover 我會習慣+","
以上~
Finally, they "are" born on the same date.
回覆刪除應該用were
Moreover~as Ann. moreover建議可以加個逗號
回覆刪除然後Finally~so many similar things.這邊的similar things可以替換成similarities或其他類似的詞^_^