I will still choose English as my major in college, for I think my English ability is not good enough. Studying a foreign language is a long and difficult process, so I have to make more efforts to improve my English ability. I hope I can be admitted to your college because I think I need further training in all aspects of English skills. Your university provides exactly the courses I need. I believe the excellent faculty and the perfect facilities in your school will help me polish my English ability a lot. Though, I’m still not sure about my future career, I will equip myself with professional English skills during the four years in college and explore where my interest is and what I can do in the future. I will study hard to enrich my knowledge and enhance my abilities of all aspects.
Though, ...and explore where my interest is and what I can do in the future.
回覆刪除覺得應該是"what my interest is"。
如有誤,請不吝嗇指教。
感覺沒什麼大問題,讀起來也挺通順的。
回覆刪除沒什麼錯誤的~
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