2011年5月25日 星期三
Expressing an opinion-(2) Should students wear uniforms to go to school?
I'm in favor of wearing uniforms to go to school. First, it is convenient for students to go to school. They dont't have to worry about what to wear today. In addition, wearing uniforms gives others the impressions of clean and identical. That will make people feel comfortable. Although many people think that wear their clothes are more beautiful and also have more varieties than wear uniforms, I still think that wearing uniforms is better than wearing our clothes. Due to all of these reasons, one must conclude that wearing uniforms to go to school is the best way.
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Although many people think that "wear" their clothes "are" more beautiful and also "have" more varieties than wear uniforms,
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後面動詞要用單數
Although many people think that wear their clothes are more beautiful and also have more varieties than wear uniforms
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且are也會寫is
以上~
幫妳+1
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1.They dont't have to worry about what to wear today.
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2.Although many people think that wear their clothes are more beautiful and also have more varieties than wear uniforms, I still...
→Although many people think that wearing their clothes is more beautiful and also has more varieties than wearing uniforms, I still...
wear their clothes are more beautiful and also have more varieties than wear uniforms
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I'm in favor of wearing uniforms to go to school.在下提議可以直接寫＂~wearing uniforms to school.＂
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→＂don't＂。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
impressions是不是要用單數呀?
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其他沒有(笑
First, it is convenient for students to go to school我覺得可以把go to school去掉
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