2011年5月25日 星期三
Expressing an opinion-(1) Should the death penalty exist?
Many people are concerned about the issue about death penalty. Some of them think it should exist, while the others have the opposite views. I think that the death penalty should exist. First of all, it deters people from committing crimes. When people want to commit crimes, they will think of the consequence and stop to do what they want to do. Second, it makes criminals pay the untimate price. Because they killed people, they had to pay for what they had done. No one has the power to deprive of one's life. Finally, it rids society of menaces. We don't have to live under the fear. Although it sometimes means killing an innocent person, the probability is tiny. It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I support the exist of the death penalty.
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they will think of the consequence and stop "to do" what they want to do.
回覆刪除這裡要用doing吧!
stop+Ving→停止做某件事
stop+to V→停止，去做某事
they will think of the consequence and stop to do
回覆刪除裡的to do是doing喔!
以上~
幫妳+1
XDD
When people want to ... and stop to do what they want to do.
回覆刪除此具有二個＂want to＂，
我想把第一個換成＂feel like +V-ing＂。
＆應該是＂stop doing＂才對。
Second, it makes criminals pay the untimate price.
妳是不是想寫＂ultimate＂？
Because they ..., they had to pay for what they had done. 在下想改：
＂...they had to be responsible for what ...＂
No one has the power to deprive of one's life. Finally, it rids society of menaces.
在下想合併寫成：
＂No one has the power to deprive one of life, while death penalty rids society of menaces.＂
We don't have to live under the fear.
個人私心之作：（參考用）
＂Then we don't have to live under
the fear anymore.＂
It is for all ...the exist of the death penalty.
應該是＂existence＂。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
1.Second, it makes criminals pay the untimate price.
回覆刪除→Second, it makes criminals pay the ultimate price.
2.It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I support the exist of the death penalty.
→It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I support the existence of the death penalty.
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回覆刪除上面都說得很清楚了呢^^
回覆刪除stop to do what they want to do
回覆刪除stop do"ing" what they want to do
好像就沒有錯了=)
criminals pay the untimate price是ultimate哦
回覆刪除and stop to do what they want to do應該是stop doing哦