2011年5月18日 星期三

Contrasting-(2)

  I am going to hire a new English teacher for my school. And I received two resumes from people applying for the job. They are Lynn and Debra, and they have different experience. First of all, Debra has more education than Lynn. Second, Debra’s employment experience is abundant. However, Lynn’s employment experience isn’t as abundant as Debra. Finally, Debra has published the book about English verb tenses. Therefore, if I were the president, I would hire Debra. Because I think he is more qualified than Lynn.
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  1. 篔簹2011年5月25日 上午9:07

    and they have different experience
    的experience要加s吧(?)

    Therefore, if I were the president, I would hire Debra.
    應該不用用假設吧?
    開頭你就是校長了(汗

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  2. 冠伶2011年5月25日 晚上11:39

    1.Therefore, if I were the president, I would hire Debra.
    →Therefore, as the president, I will hire Debra.
    2.Because I think he is more qualified than Lynn.
    →Because I think she is more qualified than Lynn.
    (以上，淺見…)

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  3. 宜珍2011年5月25日 晚上11:42

    if I were the president
    可以刪掉

    he is more qualified than Lynn
    ㄜ...同學他是女的= =

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  4. 品婷2011年5月25日 晚上11:42

    I would hire Debra. Because I think he is more qualified than Lynn.合併成一句比較好
    還有結論句應該不用假設吧因開頭不是說I am going to hire a teacher嗎

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  5. 亭安2011年5月29日 清晨6:31

    Therefore, if I were the president, I would hire Debra.
    因為是你自己要雇用的
    所以if I were the president要刪掉

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  6. 妤如2011年5月29日 上午9:30

    ＂abundant＂一詞重複出現，
    在下覺得換成別的詞會比較好喔。

    ＂Debra＂→＂黛布拉＂，
    是女生。

    如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。

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  7. 孟萱2011年6月1日 晚上11:21

    Therefore, if I were the president, I would hire Debra. Because I think he is more qualified than Lynn.
    這裡不用放假設句哦~~

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