I have two friends who called Sally and Ann. They are alike in several ways. For example, Sally is tall and thin with short, black hair. Similarly, Ann is a tall, thin girl with short black hair. Sally likes to wear pink dress. Likewise, Ann likes to wear pink dress. They also have the same brown eye color. In addition, both of them are good at playing volleyball. Finally, Sally is born on May 9, 1993, and so is Ann. It’s really a coincidence that they have so many similarities.
Sally likes to wear pink dress
回覆刪除中間應該要加a 或是 es
下一句也是
dress要加es
回覆刪除然後
eye要加s這樣
I have two friends who "are" called Sally and Ann
回覆刪除pink dress"es"
Sally is born on May 9, 1993, and so is Ann
應該是was吧
It’s really a coincidence that they have so many similarities
→it is so coincident that~~~~
以上
1.Sally likes to wear pink dress.
回覆刪除→Sally likes to wear pink dresses.
2.Likewise, Ann likes to wear pink dress.
→Likewise, Ann likes to wear pink ones.
3.Finally, Sally is born on May 9, 1993, and so is Ann.
→Finally, Sally was born on May 9, 1993, and so was Ann.
(以上，淺見…)
two friends who called Sally and Ann
回覆刪除→who are called Sally and Ann
wear pink dress要用複數
I have two friends who called Sally and Ann.
回覆刪除在下想把＂who＂去掉。
Finally, Sally is born on ... and so is Ann.
二個＂is＂應該用過去式＂was＂。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
Sally likes to wear pink dress. Likewise, Ann likes to wear pink dress.
回覆刪除dress要加es哦
Finally, Sally is born on May 9, 1993, and so is Ann.
is要改成was~~